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Girl Like Raindrops by ~Seqkat:iconSeqkat:



I'm just looking, not getting too close
But
She smiles, soft like blue stars
Hello easily exchanged - sounds like a mirror image of goodbye
And
We'll turn to go, Easily forgotten
But I, I like your... And she...

See You Around.

Coffee like a promise, like a wish
And
This time we'll talk, spilling sounds of delight to flicker before us
To hide our ease.

She still smiles like stars, But cold, And cuts:
If
You can think that, maybe I don't need you as a friend
I don't. She doesn't.
Sorry, Like raindrops, spilling into our silence to hover between us.
Hiding despair.

See You Around.

But in negative.
Stillness stretches, breaks. Falls.
We shout in solitude, Icy facades never hiding our pain
And
I love you, I love you
But
Like raindrops
I lose you.

If I could...
But
I didn't.
Like stars, she smiles wistfully at everyone around me, giving them what I lose
And
I'm sorry, I'm sorry
Like raindrops, threatens to cloud our hatred
Your anger
My dismissal.

And
Like raindrops
We fall.
©2006-2009 ~Seqkat
:iconseqkat:

Author's Comments

A Catalogue of Friendships.


Okay, so, inspired by David Levithan, this is my poor attempt at the first of a set of Free Verse, based on different friendships, and experiences within them.

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Vague. I like.

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